but it was a 10 second effort at a party so..who cares?
TO BE CONTINUED
ill continue it if you guys want me to it would be called the namescape
now random awsome picture spam!
ty comment and crit
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page 3 of link's nameless staff done! |
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you know i could of had really done better now that i think of it.....
but it was a 10 second effort at a party so..who cares?
TO BE CONTINUED ill continue it if you guys want me to it would be called the namescape now random awsome picture spam!
ty comment and crit
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Matan nawi |
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Dude I don't think there's any point at critting this because like you said it was a short effort with now real intention to it, you yourself say you
could have done better so until you show us this "better" we shouldn't crit it.
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blu |
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Saw this and I felt I definitely have to crit.
If this is your quick-draw-who-cares effort, then you definitely have talent for comic-ing. Cos the clarity of plot, flow, rhythm, use of story effects and expressions are all there. Pretty pictures alone do not a good comic make, though it sure helps a lot. But to be able to express a story with impact and make people laugh/cry within a few panels... that is a talent too, and sometimes easily overlooked in a pile of pretty pictures. That said, talent needs practice to push it to greater heights. And good pictures(perspectives, anatomy etc) are still a neccessity one can't run very far from. So, ya, keep it up, do better, I'll certainly be looking forward to more from you. ^^ |
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As it is already said: It would be great to see some work with a little bit more effort in it
I've posted some fast drawn pictures also. So I'm not trying to say you may not do that ^^ But still it would be nice to see, for example some manga, from you which is made with a little bit more effort. (Maybe because I'm working on with a 10 pages manga myself and it would be nice to see someone elses work too) "why doesn't it have a name" and "fine" Pictures were good Keep on the good work!
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franklyn for being something quick you got the plot down good and i got it so that has ti say something the expresstion. is that link?
matan nawi that is just plan mean to say that franklyn what to uplaod it cuz it was funny. |
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Franklyn |
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yes its link and im working on the next page right now
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shaneyney1718 |
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cool like you could make a new one, like sometimes i make a draft of my work and the next one i work on the spots that was not good
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i might
alright heres the next page of this comic i out a little more effort into it this time here sorry its in a link i cant get it to upload to the forums weird hu?
God
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if you have the time and patience http://franklyndrawer.deviantart.com/gallery/
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WoahStripes |
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Noo, franklyn!! Why must you shame me!?
But seriously. I already told you, no double posts. The Edit button is your friend. |
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woops sorry woahstripes its just hard to get used to
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Muira |
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Nice. A stick named Carl!
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umm yeah...i think it was a bit random
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