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Walking on water... sort of |
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MU Freshman
Posts: 17 06/29/09 14:10:34 |
Here's something I worked on for a large portion of today. I realize there are some errors (like her left hand and foot) and the pose looks a bit wonky, but hopefully it looks all right overall. Of course, if you spot anything I didn't that I should be aware of, I'm very open to criticism, so blast away --Andrew
Last Edited By: AndrewYY 06/30/09 13:47:05.
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MU Junior
Posts: 194 06/29/09 18:09:14 |
Aw, cute idea.
I couldn't find any mistakes other than the ones you've already noticed. You're right that the girl's feet and a few other parts of the body are awkward-looking, but if you practice you're sure to get better. ^^ I really like the way you shaded the drawing, and the girl's face is too cute. Good luck! -Eni
I have loads of ideas; they're just hiding from me.
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MU Sophomore
Posts: 71 06/29/09 22:20:41 |
Very nice job. Needs a little work on hands, hair, legs, and pants. =]
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MU Junior
Posts: 395 06/30/09 06:58:59 |
Keep it up !! Ruuuuuuuuuuuuuu................
ToHeart2xRated & ToHeart2Anotherdays を したこと が 有りますか ?
ToHeart2 ほど 好きな アニメ は 有りませんよ !     
るるる。。。 |
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MU Freshman
Posts: 26 07/01/09 14:26:29 |
I like it, but I think both of the feet look kind of weird. That's the only problem I see, though, so good job!
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MU Sophomore
Posts: 64 07/03/09 18:44:52 |
Phantasia wrote: diddo |
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MU Junior
Posts: 181 07/06/09 10:18:02 |
cool the eyes are really good!
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MU Sophomore
Posts: 71 07/06/09 10:37:02 |
Besides what has been said, I'm seeing a bit of proportion problems. Other than that, you did a good job(better than me when I was starting to draw anime
that's fore sure), keep it up! ^^
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