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AnimeJei |
Updated: Two new character design faces... |
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Both gothic and kogal.. I know I screwed up on the faces >< But do their styles show? I guess it would help to do the full body designs with outfits,
I'll get on it soon. I am not sure about Alice's hair (gothic).. Thanks for any critiques/comments!
If you have time, stop on by my gallery: http://animejei.deviantart.com/ Much appreciated!! ^^
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*SQUEEE* I love the hair on the kogal one...so awesome (b^_^)b I don't think I can find anything to really critique on
FEAR THE BRAEDINATOR *FOOZAH!!!*
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Light Zukashi |
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Styles show quite well, but it would do better if we had a full body view for that.
So are these character designs for that same competition? Giving and receiving criticism, by Ellen 'the Alaskan' Million at Elfwood. |
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AnimeJei |
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I'm not sure if I will use these for the square contest or not.. maybe one of them. I have been working on that contest for a week or more and now my
drawing are coming out a cross between my style and Nomura-san's.. >< Thank you for looking and comments.. here is a full drawing of Ramu, the kogal,
but room for lots of improvement, I am just trying to get an idea for her outfit. So one side is jeans, the other is cut short to show the fishnet stocking.
Maybe not kogal-ish enough?
If you have time, stop on by my gallery: http://animejei.deviantart.com/ Much appreciated!! ^^
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David Tranter |
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SWEET, no crits from me unless you count that the goth face is a tad uneven, As a fan of anime hair................AWESOME DUDE.
Show mores lol. Really good job.
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AnimeJei |
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Thank you ^^ Hai, I really like how her hair turned out and I hope the new picture will look even better colored once colored and given more of a kogal look.
What pens are everyone using to ink? (aside from tablets).. all I have no is my microperm .35mm (03).. I dunno what happened to my others over the years
>< I need to go to pearl arts tomorrow and get some more... Thank you for your comments and critiques.. I hope I can make her look better this weekend.
Updates: Here is a completed Yuki...
If you have time, stop on by my gallery: http://animejei.deviantart.com/ Much appreciated!! ^^
Last Edited By: AnimeJei 04/12/08 20:34:21.
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