I'm glad you took your time on this piece, GLG. Therefore I'm willing to give you a full-super-visual-ilikebananas-critique 
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I hope this helps!
-Slif
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I hope this helps!
-Slif
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GothicLolitaGals gallery updated page 25: WIPs
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Posts: 807 04/26/09 09:37:23 |
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Posts: 1487 04/26/09 11:22:18 |
nya thanks for teh mutiple comments . before you commented i had changed the shoes but i still think it's bad so ill get some refrence.. or i think
i'll change the legs as they are rather awkward..perhaps a more natural position. Aaa ye sthe hair.. i was trying to make it starndy but as you can see it
has failed misserably.. il group it together more and give it more of a flow.
thanks y'all ^^ i'll give a go at colouring but i'm actually not sure HOW ot colour ... |
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Posts: 1487 04/26/09 11:48:35 |
 anybetter nya? (
the leg has been free transformed so it's a bit angular so please ignore that fact ^_^
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Posts: 395 04/26/09 23:02:47 |
Hum ! Let's see !! It's better !!
But i think her pose still little awkward ! Cuz when i look at her legs, look like she turn on the left but in fact, her body turn on the right !!! U need fix her shoulder !! Look like u forgot to fix it, right ? And her arms is bigger now, but they're still small !! Ruuuuuuuuuu........................
ToHeart2xRated & ToHeart2Anotherdays を したこと が 有りますか ?
ToHeart2 ほど 好きな アニメ は 有りませんよ !     
るるる。。。 |
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Posts: 1487 04/27/09 21:56:35 |
I tried a multitude of different legs but.. i'm sorry to say i gave up through pure frustration and lacking of kowledge in antomy and perspective so i
was wondering if could get some help..liek visual help?
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kaho17 |
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Posts: 395 04/29/09 06:43:31 |
Ok ! I'll fix to u ! Wait for me !!!
Ruuuuuuuu..............
ToHeart2xRated & ToHeart2Anotherdays を したこと が 有りますか ?
ToHeart2 ほど 好きな アニメ は 有りませんよ !
るるる。。。 |
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Posts: 798 05/02/09 06:32:09 |
And while Kaho17 is busy in the anime kitchen fixing u'r Mio up, I was wondering why not try to learn a bit more about anatomy GLG. Often times drawing the
clothes at once and not having a full grasp of how the body beneath it looks like creates miscalculations, knowing even a bit of it's structure is really
rewarding and could really boost things up faster that you could imagine, then add the knowledge you learned from the years with MU.
Best I could do at the moment, Sorry I could not give you any visual advises T_T Be frustrated if you feel like it (it's normal), but remember "Giving up" is NEVER AN OPTION! |
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Posts: 395 05/02/09 07:30:38 |
Sorry i'm so late ,Gothic ! Cuz i've just finished my vacation at the beach with my family !!
So, i fixed for u ! Cuz U named for ur pic that " I_Gave_up_with_the_legs_by_gothiclolitagal" so i fixed legs, and her shouder to make more natural, i fixed by mouse so it'll a little ugly ! Hope u like it !! And like Strafe Breaker said, u should learn about anatomy !!!  Ruuuuuuuu............
ToHeart2xRated & ToHeart2Anotherdays を したこと が 有りますか ?
ToHeart2 ほど 好きな アニメ は 有りませんよ !
るるる。。。
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Posts: 1487 05/04/09 22:14:49 |
*Nod* ye si do have anatomy troubles so i will find some refrence and turotrials! and stuff..
oh thanks kahoo! you have really neat line work for a nice ^_^ i think i'll go over it 'cos teh lines look really different to mine, i draw extremly sketchy ^_^' just to keep my self busy i doodled for a bit and came up with some fan art nya~ oh and i also finished my MU year pic!  <- fan art, L and Beyond birthday
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girl liek soem , comic type person my dad used to like..i don't know wth he's talking about though ^_^
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Posts: 395 05/05/09 06:20:09 |
Both of them are good !! U've been improving , i think !! Especially, the 2rd one !! The shade is pretty good but her left arm is quite long !!Her pose is
good now !!
Anyway, i really think u'd got the improvement !!! Keep it up !! I hope to see more ur works !! Ruuuuuuu................
ToHeart2xRated & ToHeart2Anotherdays を したこと が 有りますか ?
ToHeart2 ほど 好きな アニメ は 有りませんよ !
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Posts: 1487 05/05/09 07:12:25 |
thank you kahoo ^_^ aa i see teh arm that is kinda behind her back?..yeah it looks kinda long i thin'k i'll fix taht if i can find the original
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Posts: 266 05/05/09 07:38:39 |
Draw more and more stuff, Gal. And don't bother edit them too much, just make them clean then you'll impreove in no time
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Posts: 181 05/06/09 12:05:51 |
wow! you never showed me that army girl one, the shading is awesome
the L one is great too ^^ |
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Posts: 1487 05/06/09 21:16:19 |
tonee that is advice i've never heard, yet it is the advice that makes more sense, so i stopped fixing the camo girl and orceeded to draw Neku fan art
(neku is from the game "The world ends with you" incase you might not have known)
nya ha~ i drew Neku as a Neko shounen (first time so i need ear help!) 
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Posts: 266 05/07/09 02:05:47 |
Awesome new sketch I especially love the feet you did and the clothes you designed. The left ear looks like it doesnt connect to the head but it s ok since it
s your first time drawing ears.
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Posts: 395 05/07/09 06:25:17 |
look at the first pic u up, Gothic !! U're really improved !!!
Ruuuuuuuu.................
ToHeart2xRated & ToHeart2Anotherdays を したこと が 有りますか ?
ToHeart2 ほど 好きな アニメ は 有りませんよ !
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Posts: 1487 05/07/09 06:42:33 |
tonee: >< eh this is emarassing i didn't design the clothes, it's Nekus normal clothes ><, but i see what you mean about the ear, when i
re-line i'll edit ^_^
Kahoo: thank youu ^_^  Thats Neku
nya <3 he's cool
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Posts: 28 05/08/09 18:37:09 |
Heya, I think the arms and legs you did came you well with their curves and everything; that's usually something I have trouble with. His left hand come
out well too~
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Posts: 1487 05/09/09 05:27:53 |
thank you ^_^
aa i started some colouring.. 
also i drew some Ouka fanart <33 i love .Hack//legend of teh twilight and ouka is an awsome fighter!  its a bit bad but it was fun to draw (also please excuse any
wobbly lines as it was drawn on the school bus..*shudder* icky school mouldy bus)
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tonee89 |
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Posts: 266 05/09/09 07:57:27 |
The colorsl ook good to me but why only the legs...?
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