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Posts: 10 11/03/09 19:11:36 |
Voila, some almost recent pictures I drew. This is my first time posting in the 'Gallery section'. Being nice is not necessary as long as you
don't.... um... flame or whatever it's called.
I wonder if these will work... http://yfrog.com/ealolitaip http://yfrog.com/eauniversep http://yfrog.com/j8ninap |
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Posts: 338 11/04/09 02:51:00 |
not bad
 but i noticed some common issues with all three.
the proportions are off - remember to use guides to get them correct, and also think a little about how bones and muscles will naturally move, bend and relax. and your hands need work. it's great that you ARE drawing full hands and not hiding them! practice is the only way to improve
Cna yuo raed tihs? Olny 55% of plepoe can.
I cdnuolt blveiee taht I cluod aulaclty uesdnatnrd waht I was rdanieg. The phaonmneal pweor of the hmuan mnid, aoccdrnig to a rscheearch at Cmabrigde Uinervtisy, it dseno't mtaetr in waht oerdr the ltteres in a wrod are, the olny iproamtnt tihng is taht the frsit and lsat ltteer be in the rghit pclae. The rset can be a taotl mses and you can sitll raed it whotuit a pboerlm. Tihs is bcuseae the huamn mnid deos not raed ervey lteter by istlef, but the wrod as a wlohe. Azanmig huh? yaeh and I awlyas tghuhot slpeling was ipmorantt! fi yuo cna raed tihs, palce it in yuor siantugre. |
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Posts: 16 11/04/09 06:14:22 |
That's very nice and you use a color for it. I think I can't doing it like you do(give a color to my artwork) I'm so jealous.
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Posts: 10 11/04/09 15:41:45 |
Haha! The coloring with me is rare. I don't ever do it.
I'm working on proportioning things correctly! (Mostly hands). Thank you people for your thoughts of wisdom! |
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Posts: 174 11/04/09 19:49:31 |
*breathes the nostalgia* I remember back in da day when i drew like this. of course, i was draw teh gays like this, which made it horrifying. Anyway, the most
important thing about when i was drawing was the eyes. I would suggest looking at the eyes of your favorite anime or something and copying those, try multiple
styles, find one that is easy for you so it does not get lopsided when you are drawing.
it would also be to your benefit to draw much bigger. a good artist, doesn't matter if its anime or fine arts, has very strong roots in traditional sketching and observational pieces, whether its people or just a piece of fruit. A few still life sketches will help steady your hand, which is part of the problem i am seeing in your drawings.
Learn the rules before you trample them.
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Posts: 1553 11/04/09 21:49:16 MU Moderator |
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MU Freshman
Posts: 10 11/05/09 17:53:43 |
I am wondering too.....
anyway... Thank you for the thought. Though I don't think I will be able to do any real life sketches... No one would stick around long enough 
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Posts: 338 11/06/09 00:48:45 |
mor, even just quick stick figure-ish sketches of the people around you will help! they help you get the feel for poses, angles and how a body moves naturally
and you only need 2-3 minutes for quick life drawings! it's a lot of fun just sitting at the park or down the street and drawing whatever attracts your
eye
Cna yuo raed tihs? Olny 55% of plepoe can.
I cdnuolt blveiee taht I cluod aulaclty uesdnatnrd waht I was rdanieg. The phaonmneal pweor of the hmuan mnid, aoccdrnig to a rscheearch at Cmabrigde Uinervtisy, it dseno't mtaetr in waht oerdr the ltteres in a wrod are, the olny iproamtnt tihng is taht the frsit and lsat ltteer be in the rghit pclae. The rset can be a taotl mses and you can sitll raed it whotuit a pboerlm. Tihs is bcuseae the huamn mnid deos not raed ervey lteter by istlef, but the wrod as a wlohe. Azanmig huh? yaeh and I awlyas tghuhot slpeling was ipmorantt! fi yuo cna raed tihs, palce it in yuor siantugre. |
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